Incandescence | ||||||||
Greg Egan | ||||||||
Gollancz, 272 pages | ||||||||
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A review by Paul Kincaid
Such questions seem particularly apposite when considering a new novel by Greg Egan. Egan is, without doubt,
one of the best hard SF writers working at the moment, but unless you are already convinced of the beauty of mathematics,
there are long stretches when this novel is going to seem no more lyrical, visionary or startling than a text book. The
longest and most exciting section of the novel involves two characters from a largely non-scientific culture slowly
deducing the laws of gravity, of planetary motion, and eventually of relativity. If you are already up to date with
the state of scientific knowledge, there is nothing challenging or speculative in any of this. Indeed, if you are
already conversant with all of this, the chances are that you'll be jumping ahead of the plot: okay, if they've
deduced that about spin, then the next thing they'll need to work out is... Of course, if all of this math is a
mystery to you, then you'll be delighted to discover that Egan has the enviable ability to make even complex ideas
seem accessible without recourse to a single equation (and only a couple of fairly crude diagrams). One of the joys
of the novel is that it can leave someone with only a woolly grasp of how numbers work feeling empowered, as if
they can at last understand how such complicated scientific ideas are put together. But you have to ask yourself
how many people like that would be reading Egan in the first place.
There is a suggestion that Egan might recognise this dilemma also.
Most of his invention, his interest, is poured in to those sections of the novel that deal with this modest mathematical
advance. This is deliberately small scale stuff, it all takes place within a small fragment of rock known as the
Splinter, and the creatures, though they are not fully and clearly described, seem to be insectoid both in size and
appearance. But this is balanced by an encompassing story that is large scale, colourful space opera, a rich stew of
sweeping vistas, technological wonders and breathless action that deliberately counterpoints what is happening in
the Splinter. But where the story of the Splinter is told with care and detail and patience, the space opera is
careless, ill-plotted, and fails to resolve any of the numerous threads of plot it sets up. The space opera serves,
in the end, to provide a certain amount of context for the situation the Splinter is in, that is all.
There was a planet upon which there was an advanced but not yet space-faring civilisation; the planet faced certain
doom; the civilisation devised an ingenious but desperate attempt to preserve life. Millennia later, the Splinter is
just one of what we might call lifeboats surviving the wreck and now orbiting a black hole. Such is the background
we eventually learn in the space opera; the rest is fluff in which Egan himself has no obvious interest.
The space opera starts off full of promise. There is a galaxy-wide civilisation, known as the Amalgam, which occupies
all but the galactic core. Here, in the galaxy's central bulge, is the territory of the Aloof, who have no interaction
with the Amalgam. The only time citizens of the Amalgam are permitted to enter the territory of the Aloof is when they
take the perilous journey as unencrypted data across the core. Then one traveller is wakened mid-journey, shown a
meteor with traces of DNA, and sent on her way again. Once back in the Amalgam, she goes to a bar, seeks out a
complete stranger, Rakesh, tells him her story and he decides to investigate. Which is, when you think about it,
about as inept and unlikely a way to open a novel as you can get. It is, on the very first page, our first
suggestion that Egan isn't really putting his full heart and soul into this part of the novel.
Rakesh, with a partner, Parantham, sets out for the forbidden territory of the Aloof. Except that this is neither
as perilous nor as challenging as you might expect. Not only do the Aloof create no obstacles, they guide them
straight to their destination and provide every tool and piece of information that might be required. In other
words, apart from the fact that they never appear, the Aloof behave exactly opposite to the way we have been told
they behave. What is being set up, therefore, is a classic series of science fiction
mysteries: why did the Aloof stop the original traveller? Why did she approach Rakesh? Why did the Aloof allow
Rakesh and Parantham into their territory? Why are they being so helpful? Will the result of this quest crack open
at least part of the age-old mystery of the Aloof? Before we are very far into the novel, however, it becomes
apparent that neither Rakesh, Parantham, nor their author has any interest in even asking these questions, let
alone answering them.
Instead we get a straightforward journey to their destination, a little exploration when they get there, and
nothing more. That even Egan is growing bored with this uneventful adventure is evident in the fact that the
chapters concerning Rakesh and Parantham become noticeably shorter and further apart as the novel progresses;
you half expect them to disappear completely before the book actually ends.
In contrast, the chapters concerning Roi and Zac and their fellows inside the Splinter become steadily longer and
more frequent. Although they start out in a distinctly low-key, low-tech, colourless manner, the interest is all
here. The inhabitants of the Splinter follow a tightly regulated, narrowly focussed existence, but when Roi
encounters Zac he is separated from the herd and following his own idiosyncratic researches in the zero-gravity
core of the Splinter. Roi becomes fascinated by Zac's endeavours and she decides to join him, and between them
they effectively invent mathematics and astrophysics.
The more they discover, however, the more it becomes apparent that something is wrong. Gradually building a
team around them, they explore the nature of their world, venture daringly out onto the surface, and eventually
embark on a bold attempt to change the orbit of their own world in order to avoid a cataclysmic collision with
a rock that is spiralling in to the black hole.
It is classic hard SF: the quest to understand the rules governing the world, and then to find a way of applying
those rules in a fresh way to avoid disaster. As in much hard SF, characterisation is minimal.
Despite the fact that one is female and compassionate, and the other is male and obsessive, there isn't really
much that distinguishes Roi from Zac; while the other creatures in the Splinter are little more than names. Though
the nature of their culture, not quite a hive mind but certainly collective and communal in everything it does,
goes a long way towards excusing such a lack of individuality. And we learn only as much about their environment
as we need to understand the science. Even when, late in the novel, Rakesh ventures into a habitat that is clearly
the twin of the Splinter (one of the real disappointments of this novel is that the two arcs of story never
actually intersect), he does so in the form of one of its native inhabitants which somehow prevents us getting a
clear view from
outside: these are never characters in a landscape. Nevertheless, as we slowly come to understand the world
and then discover the peril it faces, this is a gripping novel. It is just a pity that Egan felt that the
story of the Splinter on its own wasn't enough to sustain a full novel; or at least that he couldn't find
enough to do in the parallel story of Rakesh and Parantham to give each half of the novel equal weight.
Paul Kincaid is the recipient of the SFRA's Thomas D. Clareson Award for Distinguished Service for 2006. His collection of essays and reviews, What it is we do when we read science fiction is published by Beccon Publications. |
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